【高分范文】

　　Working at Home

　　Nowadays, more and more people choose to work at home rather than in the office. People working at home can have their free time and set their own schedules.

　　There are many strengths of working at home. Firstly, you are free to have your own work and life. Secondly, you can save the time and money for the transportation. Otherwise, there are some weaknesses of working at home as well It's not good for people to communicate with others. What's more, away from office, the working efficiency at home tends to be slower as the pressure will be less.

　　As far as I am concerned, I prefer to work at home if I have the oppor- tunity because I can work and look after my son as well.

　　【寫作點金】

　　這是一篇看圖作文。首先要明確題目的要求：既要求根據(jù)圖片的內(nèi)容分析出現(xiàn)這種事件的原因又要求分析事件的優(yōu)缺點。其次在分析原因時，要抓住要點，簡單描述，不要過多贅述。在分析事件優(yōu)缺點時，要注意分點列出，有條理，有邏輯。最后。陳述下自己的觀點。

　　【高頻詞句】

　　on the other hand另一方面

　　as well也。又

　　be good for對…有好處

　　what’s more此外，另外

　　tend to有…趨勢，傾向

　　as far as sb．be concemed對某人來說

　　prefer to do更喜歡做