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1.某英文雜志正在舉辦以"Fancy yourself as an interviewer"為主題的征文活動,請你以“A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview" 為題,寫一篇英語短文。
內(nèi)容包括:
1. 采訪的對象;
2. 采訪的原因;
3. 想提的問題。
注意:
1. 詞數(shù)120左右;
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;
3. 短文中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息;
4. 短文的標(biāo)題已給出,不計人總詞數(shù)。
A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview
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【參考答案】
A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview
The person I would like to interview is Yang Liwei.
I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space but also one of the greatest astronauts in the world. I have long been interested in space exploration and I believe I could learn a great deal from him about it.
If I could interview him, I would ask him what made him an astronaut and how he was trained. I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is such great fun as I have read. Finally, I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life, which must be very interesting.
【解析】
試題分析:題目是一篇命題材料作文。作文的寫作要點已經(jīng)給出,需要考生根據(jù)提示進(jìn)行寫作,作文必須涵蓋所有要點,還要注意語篇的連貫性。注意使用高級詞匯和定語從句、倒裝、強調(diào)等重點語法知識。詞數(shù)在120左右,標(biāo)題不計入總詞數(shù)。注意行文的連貫性,不能出現(xiàn)與本人有關(guān)的信息。
【亮點說明】范文使用了一些重點句型:定語從句I would like to interview is Yang Liwei;原因狀語從句because he is not only the first Chinese...;賓語從句①I could learn a great deal from him about it,②what made him an astronaut and how he was trained;條件狀語從句If I could interview him;非限制性定語從句which must be very interesting等,顯示了扎實的語法功底,也使作文的句式變得多樣;
范文還使用了一些固定搭配和固定短語:not only...but also...;one of the...;the first to do sth;be interested in;a great deal;such...as等,使作文的內(nèi)容變得更加豐富;
范文注意使用not only...but also, and, also和finally等來銜接句子,使范文顯得語意連貫、銜接緊湊。
2.Section C (25 marks)
Directions:Write an English composition according to the instructions given below.
請以老師當(dāng)眾表揚你為話題,用下面所給的句子開頭,續(xù)寫一篇英語短文。
As a student, I can tell you that there is nothing better than being praised by my teacher before my classmates. |
注意:
1. 將所有句子寫在答題卡上;
2. 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)不少于120個;
3. 不能使用真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
【答案】
One possible version:
As_a_student,_I_can_tell_you_that_there_is_nothing_better_than_being_praised_by_my_teacher_before_my_classmates.
Yesterday afternoon, Li Ming and I went home together after school. Suddenly we saw an old lady knocked down by a car. The driver ran away in his car. Li Ming and I ran over to find that the old lady's head was bleeding. She had already lost consciousness. Immediately I took out my handkerchief and covered the wound with it. Li Ming stopped a taxi quickly. Together we put the old lady into the taxi and drove her to the nearest hospital.
The old lady was saved and we also felt very pleased. What's more, I remembered the number of the car, and the traffic police caught the driver later.