從9日到12日，警方拘捕了149人，其中包括111名男子和38名女子，年齡在15歲至53歲之間，涉及罪行包括非法集結(jié)、襲警、阻礙警務(wù)人員執(zhí)行職務(wù)、藏有攻擊性武器、藏有危險(xiǎn)品等。

　　參考譯文：The 149 people, arrested between Aug. 9 and Aug. 12, comprise 111 male and 38 female, aged between 15 to 53. They were suspected of crimes including unlawful assembly, assault on policemen, obstruction of police in the execution of duty, possession of offensive weapons and dangerous objects.

　　解析：一看到長句中文，第一個(gè)思路就是要拆分。以上參考譯者來自新華社，就是用的這個(gè)方式。不過，也可以深度用簡單句的方式將中文的要點(diǎn)提練出來，其它的補(bǔ)充性信息則用定語從句，后置定語、同位語，或是補(bǔ)語的方式來表示。中文句子的核心意思是“警方拘捕149人，并對(duì)他們提出多項(xiàng)罪名指控”，于是可以嘗試這樣翻譯：111 man and 38 women, aged from 15 to 53, were arrested from August 9th to 12th, and charged unlawful assembly, assault on policemen, obstruction of police in the execution of duty, possession of offensive weapons and dangerous objects. 是不是感覺更加簡潔呢?

　　我國的黃金儲(chǔ)備從1月份的793.2億美元增長至6月底的872.7億美元。2018年末，我國的黃金儲(chǔ)備為1852噸，黃金儲(chǔ)備規(guī)模位居全球第六。

　　參考譯文：China's gold reserves have increased to $87.27 billion by the end of June, up from $79.32 billion in January. However, China was the world's sixth-largest gold reserves by the end of 2018 with a total of 1,852 metric tons.

　　解析：通常而言，漢譯英里的英文會(huì)比中文更長一些，原因是經(jīng)常是用的拆分的方法，將中文拆分成兩個(gè)獨(dú)立的句子。另一個(gè)原因則是要用到從句。不過，英語句子之間講究邏輯關(guān)聯(lián)性，經(jīng)常要用到一些連詞或副詞，用以連接前后兩句的意思。中文兩句子在字面上并沒有體現(xiàn)出黃金儲(chǔ)備數(shù)量的增長與規(guī)模在全球地位之間有什么關(guān)系，不過，很明顯，半年之間增長了近60億美元的黃金儲(chǔ)備，規(guī)模在持續(xù)擴(kuò)大，在全球的排名肯定是要上升的。用however一詞，來突顯數(shù)量對(duì)比。

　　電子煙在青少年中的使用增加，我國計(jì)劃立法監(jiān)管電子煙。

　　參考譯文：China is planning to establish legislation to supervise electronic cigarettes as use of the products increases among the youth.China is planning to establish legislation to supervise electronic cigarettes as part of overall tobacco control efforts as use of the products increases among the youth

　　解析：要準(zhǔn)確的翻譯這一句中文，首先就要準(zhǔn)確理解句中各部分之間的內(nèi)在關(guān)系。前后兩個(gè)分句之間的關(guān)系是因果，即由于越來越多的青少年電子煙，對(duì)于電子煙的立法工作就顯得非常緊迫。不過，后者是整個(gè)句子的重點(diǎn)所在，因而要放在句首以示突出。

　　到2021年底，北京市將形成一批夜間地標(biāo)、商圈和生活圈，打造具有全球知名度的“夜京城”消費(fèi)品牌。

　　參考譯文：By the end of 2021, a bunch of nighttime landmarks, business districts and living areas will be set up throughout the capital, which is expected to be featured as part of a world-renowned "Night Capital" consumer brand.(摘自中國日?qǐng)?bào))

　　解析："地標(biāo)”、“商圈”和“生活圈”，這三個(gè)詞相對(duì)來說比較中國化，如果只是簡單地譯成“nighttime landmarks”"business districts"和 "living areas"，則會(huì)讓人無法與“夜京城”的內(nèi)涵有直接地關(guān)聯(lián)起來。如果用nighttime-featured 來修飾，則會(huì)更好一些。另外，這一句，核心意思是“北京打造‘夜京城’消費(fèi)品牌”，而“形成一批夜間的地標(biāo)、商圈和生活圈”則是手段。參考譯文里，似乎將兩者的關(guān)系弄反了——從在句子結(jié)構(gòu)的地位就可以看出，將前者變成了非限定性定語從句，后者卻成了系表語。建議將參考譯為修改為：By the end of 2021, a bunch of nighttime-featured landmarks, business districts and living areas around the capital will be set up to be a part of a world-renowned "Night Capital".