III. Translation Revision（20 points，2 points for each）轉(zhuǎn)自:考試網(wǎng) - [Examw.Com]

A. Directions: Each of the following translated sentences is inadequate. Revise the given versions.

Example:

原文：Adelaide enjoys a Mediterranean climate.

譯文：阿德萊德享有地中海氣候。

改譯：阿德萊德屬地中海氣候。

36.原文：I was like that ship before my education began.

 譯文：在我的教育開始前，就像那樣一條船。

37. 原文： “Don’t order me about like that, John Durbeyfield.”

 譯文：“別像那樣在周圍命令我，約翰·德貝菲爾�！�

38. 原文：N and S Adelaide are divided by the Torrens River, spanned by four bridges and lined with ornamental gardens.

譯文：阿德萊德南北兩區(qū)被托倫斯河分割，河上有四座橋梁，兩岸點(diǎn)綴著許多花園。

39. 原文：When the crude oil is obtained from the field, it is taken to the refineries to be treated.

譯文：油田打出原油以后，便送到煉油廠去對(duì)待。

40. 原文：Belts of parklands line three sides of the area and four large open squares of lawns and trees break the regularity of the city buildings.

譯文：三面有公園環(huán)繞，區(qū)內(nèi)四大廣場有草坪和樹木，打破了市區(qū)建筑的單調(diào)。

B. Directions: Each of the following translated sentences is inadequate. Revise the given versions.

Example:

原文：中國在任何情況之下決不首先使用核武器。

譯文：At no time China will be the first to use nuclear weapons.

改譯：At no time will China be the first to use nuclear weapons.

41. 原文：我說，唯其不是文學(xué)家，我就不受文學(xué)規(guī)律的限制，我也不怕別人把我趕出文學(xué)界。

譯文：I replied, “As long as I’m not man of letters, I’m not subjected to any of the rules of literature. Nor do I have to be afraid of being thrown out of any literary circles.”

42. 原文：全面規(guī)劃，加強(qiáng)領(lǐng)導(dǎo)，這就是我們的方針。

譯文：Comprehensive planning and more effective leadership, this is our policy.

43. 原文：他在中國國內(nèi)旅游過的地方，除了井岡山以外，都是我沒有到過的。

譯文： In China, he has traveled many places where I have never visited, with the exception of Jinggang Mountains.

44. 原文： 鼓勵(lì)合營企業(yè)向中國境外銷售產(chǎn)品。

譯文： To encourage an equity joint venture to market its products outside China.

45. 原文：……可我從頭到腳淋成了落湯雞了。

譯文：…I was drenched from head to foot like a drowned cat.