2018年托福寫作模擬試題：改變家鄉(xiāng)的環(huán)境

　　托�？荚囎魑念}目：

　　If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

　　參考分析：

　　改變其環(huán)境，因?yàn)橐粋�(gè)好的環(huán)境會(huì)使人們更加快樂、更加健康、更加有效率。

　　托福考試作文范文參考：

　　If I could change one important thing about my hometown, it would be air pollution problem, and I will give the following reasons to explain why I want to solve the problem.

　　The first and most important reason is that I hope that my hometown can become a beautiful city. As an old industrial city, my hometown has made a great deal of contribution or the country’s economic development. At a result，the natural environment of the city has been badly damaged. The forest has disappeared; the mountains have become bald, and the most awful thing is that the air quality becomes more and more worsen. People seldom see the blue sky during most time of year.

　　Another reason why I want to change my hometown's air pollution situation is that the city's development needs clean and tidy environment to attract investors. nowadays people have come to know that the city's environment, which is so called “software facility of the city”，plays an important role in the city's future. For example, due to the fact that the environment of the city is very poor, many local students who pursue their study out of the city would rather find the job in other cities than coming back to their hometown after they graduated. In addition, nowadays people have paid more and more attention to their health. If the air pollution problem cannot be solved as quickly as possible, people's requirement for a healthy body will never be realized.

　　In my mind, changing air pollution will apparently be my first choice if I can change one important thing about my hometown. Fortunately people in my hometown are gradually aware of the serious problem and start doing something about it.