教育類話題題目：

　　Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To improve the quality of education, universities should spend money on salaries university professors. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

　　主體段1：

　　1.分論點(diǎn)：用一句簡單句或主從句將分論點(diǎn)清晰表達(dá)。句子切忌過于復(fù)雜，同時(shí)注意需要與總觀點(diǎn)緊密結(jié)合

　　2.說理論證：用簡潔清晰的話語對(duì)分論點(diǎn)進(jìn)行闡述解釋。說理論證在分論點(diǎn)展開時(shí)必須出現(xiàn)，此為評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中的得分點(diǎn)

　　3.細(xì)節(jié)例子：用具體的例子進(jìn)一步支持說理論證。細(xì)節(jié)例子亦是分論點(diǎn)展開時(shí)的重要步驟，評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中包含此得分點(diǎn)

　　主體段1范文：

　　Firstly, as a boast enrollment in universities nowadays, there are so many students attending college that will require more funding and resource. ❶Universities should employ more faculties, purchase more facilities to cope with the increasing population in campus. ❷Only that happens that every student will get equal chance to gain knowledge and share the colorful campus life. ❸For instance, when I was a fresh student in my college, owing to so many students want to study in library that I need to get up early and rush the way to get a seat. Limited seats in the library influences students' study passion which leads to the decline of the quality of education in the end. So the most important thing to improve quality of education is to make the facilities prefect.

　　范文解析：

　　1.此處分論點(diǎn)為第二句，提出大學(xué)應(yīng)該聘用更多的教職員工，且購買更多的設(shè)備來應(yīng)對(duì)在校園內(nèi)不斷增加的學(xué)生數(shù)量。

　　2.說理論證中提出關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)，即只有那樣，那么所有的學(xué)生都能得到平等的機(jī)會(huì)來獲得知識(shí)及分享豐富多彩的校園生活。

　　3.利用For instance引出具體事例，比如當(dāng)我還是一個(gè)大一新生的時(shí)候，由于很多學(xué)生想在圖書館學(xué)習(xí)，為了盡快占一個(gè)座位我需要早起。進(jìn)一步證明了提高學(xué)校設(shè)施的重要性。

　　主體段2：

　　主體段2范文：

　　❶What's more, universities should hold some international communicating meetings and introduce professors who are talented, knowledgeable and prestigious. ❷So students can have more opportunities to share the advanced achievements directly and communicate with the professors who are famous in their interested field. ❸For example, my university will invite some famous professor to give speech every semester. I think that will inspire students' creativity, intelligence and imagination which is needed in the college study, then they will contribute more to the university and the society.

　　范文解析：

　　1.此處分論點(diǎn)為第一句，提出大學(xué)應(yīng)該舉行一些國際交流會(huì)議，給學(xué)生介紹一些有才華的、知識(shí)淵博且著名的教授。再次突出對(duì)于文章總觀點(diǎn)的贊同。

　　2.此處給出的說理論證，提出這樣學(xué)生可以有更多的機(jī)會(huì)來分享先進(jìn)的成果，或直接與那些著名的教授在他們感興趣的領(lǐng)域進(jìn)行溝通。

　　3.利用For example引出具體事例，比如我念的大學(xué)每學(xué)期會(huì)邀請(qǐng)一些著名大學(xué)教授來進(jìn)行演講。此處事例進(jìn)一步證明分論點(diǎn)中的說法，點(diǎn)明了分論點(diǎn)的重要性。