托福作文高分結(jié)尾的寫法

　　高分結(jié)尾，我們有至少三種解決方法。

　　Plan A: 重申立場+補充

　　Plan B: 重申立場+反方觀點的弱點

　　Plan C: 重申立場+反問句

　　不難看出，這三種方法都具備兩個共同要素：重申立場。得分點即要滿足評分標準的syntactic variety(遣詞造句的多樣性)，也就是說若是機械地抄題目或開頭的我方立場表述，都是不可取的。

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　　Plan A

　　題目：

　　There are people who learn about life by listening to their friends’ or families’ advice. On the other hand, there are those that learn from personal experience. Which one do you prefer?

　　我方立場：

　　It is better to learn from personal experience.

　　結(jié)尾：

　　In a nutshell, it is quite common for us to seek advice from our buddies or family when faced with life dilemma, but in most cases, more benefits can be available if we pick up some lessons by our own experience. After all, it is our action rather than other people’s words that determine what kind of people we want to be. (62 words)

　　解析：

　　這個結(jié)尾采用的是Plan A，重申立場使用了比較法，這也是托福結(jié)尾最常用的一種方法，因為大多數(shù)寫作題目都涉及兩者對比。“總而言之，當面臨生活困境時人們往往會向朋友和家人求助，但在大多數(shù)情況下，如果我們自己嘗試一些事情，往往會學到更多的經(jīng)驗。“語言轉(zhuǎn)換上，使用了換主語和換詞的方法，我方立場It is better to learn from personal experience，主語是It, 但在結(jié)尾換成了benefits, 整個句子即變成了more benefits can be available if we pick up some lessons by our own experience.結(jié)尾第二句話，補充了我方立場的合理性，進行了升華。”畢竟，決定我們將來成為什么樣的人的關(guān)鍵點并非是他人的言語而是我們自己的行為�！�

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　　Plan B

　　題目：

　　When people go on a trip, some like to go with a friend while others like to go alone. Which do you prefer?

　　我方立場：

　　I would rather to travel with a friend.

　　結(jié)尾：

　　Taking all of the factors above into account, being accompanied by some close friends tends to be a better option when it comes to having a trip. This even makes more sense if one is fully aware of the possible dangers of travelling on one’s own, that is, being helpless when emergencies occur and having no one to share the excitement.

　　解析：

　　這個結(jié)尾采用了重申立場+反方觀點的弱點。“考慮到以上所列出的論點，我們可得知當說到旅游時有人陪伴是一個更好的選擇。這點更說得通，如果一個人清楚地明白獨自旅行潛藏的壞處，即遇到緊急情況的無助感以及無人分享旅途的興奮感。“語言上的主語替換尤為靈活，I would rather to travel with a friend.轉(zhuǎn)換為了Being accompanied by some close friends tends to be a better option when it comes to having a trip.

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　　Plan C

　　題目：

　　Some people like to live in a small town, while others like to live in a large city. If you had a choice, where would you like to live?

　　我方立場：

　　I would like to live in a big city.

　　結(jié)尾：

　　Although a growing number of serenity-seekers regard the smaller community as their dream homeland, I still opt for the metropolis for its convenience and dynamic life. When it comes to living, how can one possibly deny that the purpose of life is to explore new things that small towns fail to offer?

　　解析：

　　這個結(jié)尾采用了重申立場+反問句的寫法，很大氣。“盡管越來越多尋找寧靜的都市人把小城市視作自己的夢想家園，但我仍然覺得大城市更勝一籌。當談到生活，誰能否認生活的目的不就是探索新的東西嗎?而這一切都是小城市無法給與 的。“ 反問句寫的是反方立場的弱點，這其實在內(nèi)容和Plan B是相同的，只不過用的反問句來加強語氣。