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      新托福獨立寫作范文:20年后比現(xiàn)在更少的車

      中華考試網(wǎng)   2017-05-28   【

        最近托?荚嚳烧媸遣惶桨~先是閱讀出現(xiàn)了ABC卷,讓備考的小伙伴們應(yīng)接不暇;緊接著4月底考試的寶寶們就跟老師哭訴:寫作再也不是我們認(rèn)識的寫作了!

        首先,綜合寫作改套路了,聽力不再去反駁閱讀了,而是去回答閱讀中的問題。而獨立寫作的題目里竟然出現(xiàn)了一行小字: Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized example. 哦買尷!這簡直就是繼乒乓球由小改大后專為淪陷亞洲人而設(shè)計的規(guī)則變更嘛!帝國主義亡我之心不死啊!

        寶寶們別慌。今天,我們就來給各位獻(xiàn)上高分作文剖析。

        (閱讀提示:請大家先整體讀一遍TPO35的題目及范文,后面會有我的分段解析)

        TPO 35

        Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

        In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.

        Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

        大神文章:

        The Earth today faces many problems. Among these problems, the top three, in some people's perspective, are probably global warming, pollution and energy crisis. All three, if we really look into them, can be connected with the pervasive use of private cars. It is because of this, I agree with the statement that there will be fewer cars in twenty years comparing with today.

        First of all, people will definitely use fewer cars. If we look at the global media, we are seeing an increasing consciousness on environmental problems. Be it the famous documentay by Al Gore, An Inconvenient Truth, or the "Earth One Hour" movement. They all indicate a global consensus: "We need to help the environment". So what's the easiest way to help? Using fewer cars. According to a survey conducted by the Ministry of Environmental Conservation in China, more than 40 percent of carbon dioxide produced by individuals are from private cars. If the trend of eco-friendly consciousness continues to grow in the next 20 years, people will, without a doubt, use fewer and fewer cars. So, in a nutshell, the first reason why people will drive less in twenty years is because they will be more environmentally-concerned.

        Another key aspect is that, in twenty years, there will be fewer people in the world. If there are fewer people in the world, of course there will be fewer cars. If we are sensitive to global trends, we can see that a lot of countries in the world are facing a decrease in population. The biggest contributors to population growth, China and India, are also experiencing a decrease in the rate of population increase. In 20 years, I am confident that there will be, without a doubt, fewer people in the world. In this case, there will be a decrease in the needs of transportation. So, it is logical to assume that there will be fewer cars in the world twenty years from now.

        A final argument I want to make is based on the ever developing technology. In the past twenty years, we have seen tremendous innovations taken place in the field of transportation. From high-speed trains to cars that run on electric, there is simply no telling what might happen twenty years from now. Considering how much we have achieved in the past twenty years, it is not so improbable for me to say that we might not even need cars in the near future. Who's to say that we won't be traveling on more efficient vehicles? Or maybe public transportation may become so convenient that we won't even consider using private transportation ever again? The fact is, we cannot deny these possibilities for they are very likely to happen. In this light, I am definitely supportive of the view that there will be fewer cars in the future.

        From my arguments above, I think I am very optimistic about the future. I believe that, in twenty years, we will be living in a society with much fewer cars. And I am looking forward to that future.

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