新托福獨立寫作解析：政府提升公眾醫(yī)療保健

　　1.獨立寫作考察題型為絕對詞類，解題技巧選擇不同意觀點，找另外解決方法

　　2.題干中涉及到一個目的狀語為提升人們的健康，同學(xué)們考試的時候要注意不要忽略掉

　　3.考試過程中解題思路搞定后，立即寫出文章結(jié)構(gòu)：開頭段+讓步段+論點1，2+結(jié)尾段，緊接著補(bǔ)全全文。

　　4.中間段注意例子以及細(xì)節(jié)補(bǔ)充。

　　5.下面是范文，大家可以參考下。

　　6月4日托福寫作真題回憶&參考范文

　　真題回顧

　　The mostimportant thing for government to improve health care is to clean theenvironment.

　　點睛

　　題目大意：對政府來說，提升公眾醫(yī)療保健最重要的是去清潔環(huán)境。此題目為絕對詞的題目，波波建議選擇不同意，采用承認(rèn)合理性，反駁絕對性的結(jié)構(gòu)來寫作。具體來說，承認(rèn)合理性，即承認(rèn)清潔環(huán)境在健康保健方面的重要性;反駁絕對性，通過給出其他可以提升健康保健的方式來駁掉清理環(huán)境是最重要的方式。

　　托福寫作模板及參考答案：

　　托福寫作范文參考一:

　　6月4日托福獨立寫作范文

　　Do you agree or disagree: The most important thing for government to improve health care is to clean the environment.

　　As economy advances, the consequences caused by industrial development become starker and various environmental problems cover the whole world. Then comes one of the most serious issues that people’s health is confronted with huge challenges. Surely, a number of solutions have been raised and discussed and as for whether the most important thing for the government to improve health care is to clean the energy, I cast doubt on it.

　　Undeniably, cleaning the environment is an effective way to ensure people’s health. For instance, if the air pollution can be bridled, there will be fewer chances for citizens living in Beijing or TianJin suffering the respiratory diseases. Besides, citizens in Flint City could drink clean water if the water source was not acidified to erode the pipeline of tap water. However, the threats human beings are faced with do not only come from the environmental problems and the government has to lay more emphasis on the other two areas.

　　For one thing, the outbreak of viruses that could sparkle off widespread epidemics is a killer to human beings. Reflecting history can help us explore how the devastating viruses tortured human beings and the death toll was astounding. For instance, the once spread of cholera once caused the death of more than a million civilians in Russia and malaria is a kind of serious malady that could cause the death of several hundred thousand in Africa in the past. The good news is those viruses were under control finally after the efforts made by numerous medical experts. However, in recent years, people are still under huge threats of many newly found viruses like Ebola, Zika that still remain highly dangerous and could trigger huge damage to people’s physical health. Even worse, a reported man in America was found dying of Zika virus. Therefore, it is more urgent and indispensable for the government to invest to the development of medical technology.

　　For another thing, while analyzing the influence factors leading to the sub-health of most city employees, the deficiency in engaging sports can be found as one of the primary contributors. Therefore, there is necessity for the government to build more available sporting facilities nearby the communities for city workers who have to be fully involved in their career and cannot vacate enough time to either go to Gym or farther places for exercises. Take friends around me as an example. Most of them cannot afford to spend time in playing sports, one of who called Jason working as a software engineer can only get off work till 10 o’clock PM. Another friend of mine has to travel across the country for business trips several times a month. The combination of long-term involvement in career and no chance to work out lead to the obesity and the declining immunity. However, if there is a public Gym constructed around my friends’ residency, the possibilities of doing exercises could be higher and the physical conditions could be better. Accordingly, to maintain the physical health of citizens, it is more practical for the government to invest more to the construction of sports infrastructure as far as my friends are concerned.

　　In a word, even though cleaning environment means a lot to the citizens’ health care, developing medical technology and building sporting facilities can be more related to our health