Sample
one(適用于有一些背景or有一個(gè)中心詞而且編得出來(lái)那個(gè)quotation的所有情況(二選一,agree
or disagree,除了個(gè)別);
要做的:想一句簡(jiǎn)單的背景+編一句名言+改寫(xiě)兩次題目
On
contemporary society(一般的背景)/
With the advent of the technologically advanced society (the information
explosive era(與科技有關(guān)的背景),XX(中心詞)serves as a catalyst for our future
success/XX is synonymous with knowledge and the road to success/XX plays an essential/increasingly important
role in…/XX is enjoying an increasingly high popularity among people./很簡(jiǎn)單的一句背景 ,However,people(universities,
government, citizen, society,) are/is invariably faced with such a question/
can’t help wondering:改寫(xiě)題目1.Confucian
(Yu Qiuyu,
Mark Twain, William Shakespeare), (one of) the greatest and most influentialChinesephilosophers (scholars, educators, writers, thinkers, statesmen), has
insightfully commented, “___編____”I
cling to an unshakeable belief that his comment gives the answer to this
question:改寫(xiě)題目2. Among countless factors which contribute to
my position are following conspicuous ones(最后一定排比結(jié)尾,且如果字?jǐn)?shù)夠了這一句就不要)
第二種是不需要編名言,或者適用于比較非正式的話題。
Sample
two:(如果sample
one的名言編不出來(lái)或者不適合編如leisure
time,就用下面的)
要做的:想一句簡(jiǎn)單的背景+改寫(xiě)兩次題目+總起(最后寫(xiě))
On
contemporary society(一般的背景)/
With the advent of the technologically advanced society / On account of …,XX(中心詞)serves as a catalyst for our future
success/XX is synonymous with knowledge and the road to success/XX plays an essential/increasingly important
role in…/XX is enjoying an increasingly high popularity among people./ 很簡(jiǎn)單的一句背景( 如so…that…/not only…but also).However,when it comes to the choice between
AA and BB/When asked about whether改寫(xiě)題目1, people get into a dilemma.
According to my personality and experiences/As far as I am concerned/From my
perspective, I cling to an unshakeable belief that改寫(xiě)題目2.以下最后決定怎樣寫(xiě):Among
countless factors which contribute to my position are following conspicuous
ones(最后一定排比結(jié)尾)/AA not only…but also(2)/There are various merits
AA brings about, first of all, to…; secondly, to…;and lastly….
開(kāi)頭段之后就是中間段落的論述:
2、分點(diǎn)一:分層論證 Basic to any understanding of the
benefits we can get from _______ is that__________/ First and foremost, On one
hand_________, On the other hand_________ Besides/ What’s more/ In
addition. 這一段主要說(shuō)理,在分論點(diǎn)里可以加一些小的例子細(xì)節(jié),重點(diǎn)是要用一些精華句子!
3、分點(diǎn)二:舉例論證 Further leading credence to my
position is that____________ (簡(jiǎn)單闡述/例子字不夠就多講點(diǎn)廢話)I can
think of no better illustration than the example of(典型例子) / A
case in point is that(不是很典型)________,一句話總結(jié)例子:As a
result,強(qiáng)調(diào)句/倒裝句/表利弊的句型/反面論證如果沒(méi)有會(huì)怎樣