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      滿分托福作文舉例詳解

      中華考試網(wǎng)   2016-05-12   【

        托福寫(xiě)作考試前很多考生不知道怎么寫(xiě)出高質(zhì)量的作文內(nèi)容,以下是小編通過(guò)對(duì)滿分托福作文舉例分析,大家可以參考,在自己的寫(xiě)作中也可以使用一些范文中的精彩句子,跟著小編一起來(lái)看看吧!

        “Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are never satisfied with what they have; they always want something more or something different. Use specific reasons to support your answer.”

        I think it’s probably true that people are never satisfied with what they have. (開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山,亮明自己觀點(diǎn))They always want something more or something different from what is theirs. This just seems to be part of our human nature. Look at a toddler.(在引入段就舉例是屬于非常大膽的,但是如果用好了也會(huì)起到很好的作用。這里,這個(gè)例子就是作者對(duì)自己觀點(diǎn)的佐證,非常形象生動(dòng))Give her a toy to play with and she’s happy-until she sees something eke. Then she wants that other toy to play with. If she and her brother are each given a cookie, she’ll look to see whose cookie is bigger. She’ll protest loudly if she thinks her brother is getting more. (這一句看似描述,實(shí)質(zhì)是在點(diǎn)題。有很多學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作文的時(shí)候會(huì)陷入例子和話題irrelevant的困境,就是因?yàn)樵谌狈?duì)例子的剖析,以及找到和話題的切入點(diǎn)。如果是這樣的話,準(zhǔn)備再多的“萬(wàn)能例子”都是徒勞的。)

        "The grass is always greener" is an old expression, but it's a good expression of how many of us feel.(非常恰當(dāng)?shù)拿砸?We're always striving for(注意這個(gè)動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)的使用,沒(méi)有用一般的looking for或者search for,表達(dá)的感情更為強(qiáng)烈一些。)a better job, a nicer place to live, a fancier car, or more expensive clothes. Part of this reaching for more and better is because we care about what other people think and want to impress them. Part ofit is trying to make ourselves feel successful. (part of,part of 體現(xiàn)出行文的前后呼應(yīng),緊湊感)But there's also something in our nature that tells us we can do better and reach higher.

        This isn't always a negative quality. There's another saying: "A man's reach should exceed his grasp, or what's a heaven for?" It's a good thing to be constantly pushing ourselves and looking for something different. If we don't try for more and different things, we begin to, stagnate, like a pool that doesn't get any fresh water.(在理性敘述的同時(shí),也要注意用一些類比,讓行文不那么死板)

        The problem comes when we won't let ourselves be satisfied with anything we have. If we have a comfortable life and still feel as if something's missing, then we need to look inward. The something that's missing may be in our spirit. (不同尋常的結(jié)尾段)

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