Suppose you won a translation contest and your friend Jack wrote an email to congratulate you, and ask advice on translation. Write him a reply to

　　1)thank him;

　　2)give your advice.

　　You should write neatly on the ANWSER SHEET. Do not sign you own name at the end of the letter, use “Li Ming ” instead. Do not write the address .(10 point)

　　如大家所見(jiàn)，這是2016年英語(yǔ)二小作文題目。英語(yǔ)(二)考綱的寫(xiě)作部分，其實(shí)主要考查學(xué)生的應(yīng)用能力，考查范圍包括私人和公務(wù)信函、備忘錄、報(bào)告等，還應(yīng)能寫(xiě)一般描述性、敘述性和說(shuō)明或議論性的文章;而要求考生根據(jù)所給情景寫(xiě)出一篇約100詞(標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不計(jì)算在內(nèi))的應(yīng)用性短文。

　　作為寫(xiě)作B部分的小作文總分10分，大家要抓住得分點(diǎn)。小作文在評(píng)分時(shí)有如下評(píng)分要點(diǎn)：1.信息點(diǎn)——覆蓋全面;2.內(nèi)容——組織連貫;3.語(yǔ)言——準(zhǔn)確性;4.格式——符合要求;5.語(yǔ)域——恰當(dāng)。

　　不出所料，今年英語(yǔ)二的小作文再次考查了書(shū)信體，并且考查的信件可以說(shuō)是雜糅型的。這在2011年英語(yǔ)二中出現(xiàn)了同樣的考查方式：

　　Suppose your cousin LI MING has just been admited to a university write him/her a letter to：

　　(1)Congratulate him/her，and

　　(2)give him/her suggestions on how to get prepared for university life

　　You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. DO not sign your own name at the end of the letter，Use zhangwei.

　　同樣的考查方式，足以說(shuō)明一件事情——絕對(duì)要重視考研真題。跨考教育英語(yǔ)教研室的老師總在強(qiáng)調(diào)真題的重要性，希望大家以后一定要強(qiáng)化這種認(rèn)識(shí)。

　　下面我們來(lái)詳細(xì)解讀下今年的小作文，首先看一下題目要求：

　　稱呼： Dear Jack注意稱呼中，后面的逗號(hào)不可丟，也不能寫(xiě)成冒號(hào)。

　　正文

　　建議大家三步走策略——簡(jiǎn)潔、直接、明了：寫(xiě)作目的、寫(xiě)作是由、重申目的

　　第一段：寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容需涵蓋兩點(diǎn)：寫(xiě)信目的，表明感謝來(lái)自朋友的祝賀;可以采用這樣的表達(dá)方式：I’m writing to express my gratitude for your congratulation on my success in the translation contest.

　　第二段： 寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容應(yīng)以建議為主體。在這個(gè)過(guò)程中可以把日常我們?nèi)绾翁岣叩姆绞綄?xiě)進(jìn)正文，如講究學(xué)習(xí)方式、注重堅(jiān)持、多多接觸外文文化及語(yǔ)境。那本篇老師主要從前兩個(gè)方面進(jìn)行論述，表達(dá)如下：As regard to my experience, I would like to offer you some proposals in this part. At the top of list is the persistence due to the fact that you could deserve the position after days or years of efforts that you have had in the field. What’s more, you are supposed to pay more attention to the way in which you finish your major, for it plays a significant role in the process.

　　第三段：再次強(qiáng)調(diào)重申寫(xiě)信目的，如Thanks again and I do hope that my suggestions can be in favor of your future study.

　　落款： Yours sincerely, 特別提醒sincerely后面逗號(hào)不能丟;簽名： Li Ming特別注意 Ming 后面一定不能出現(xiàn)句點(diǎn)。

　　整體成文如下：

　　Dear Jack,

　　I’m writing to express my gratitude for your congratulation on my success in the translation contest.

　　As regard to my experience, I would like to offer you some proposals in this part. At the top of list is the persistence due to the fact that you could deserve the position after days or years of efforts that you have had in the field. What’s more, you are supposed to pay more attention to the way in which you finish your major, for it plays a significant role in the process.

　　Thanks again and I do hope that my suggestions can be in favor of your future study.

　　Sincerely yours,

　　Li Ming