2018年12月15日雅思寫作考試回憶及解析

　　TASK 1

　　作文主題：The bar chart shows the distribution of employment among agriculture, services, industries in three countries in 1980 and projected distribution in 2020.

　　寫作要點(diǎn)：本次考察的是多柱圖的動(dòng)態(tài)圖，雖然只有兩個(gè)時(shí)間點(diǎn)，但考生一點(diǎn)要注意到使用動(dòng)態(tài)圖的方法來進(jìn)行寫作，國家內(nèi)部每一項(xiàng)可以進(jìn)行趨勢描寫，國家之間可以進(jìn)行關(guān)鍵數(shù)據(jù)的比較，時(shí)態(tài)方面要注意到使用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)、一般過去時(shí)、一般將來時(shí)，因?yàn)闀r(shí)間有將來的部分。

　　TASK 2

　　In some cities, there are few controls over the design and construction of new homes and office buildings, so people can build in whatever style they like. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages ?

　　題目分析：

　　題目類型：文化類&城市建設(shè)類

　　提問方式：優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)類

　　Since diversity has arisen a fierce discussion among the group who wants to be different from others, and the distinctive aesthetics is being chased by more people, especially in some modern metropolises, which is reflected in the design of most building. I believe this can bring both benefits and drawbacks to the development of the cities.

　　The freedom of selecting the styles could make the society more diverse, which can embrace a variety of artists to come in and decorate the city with their talents; such phenomenon would be an effective way to promote the development of local culture and stimulate the competition between different artistic groups to inspire a more prospective cultural atmosphere. Besides, conducting the certain style in our buildings can be regarded as a release of our nature and personalities, about which most young people care in the modern world. And no one can deny that the sense of satisfaction brought by living in the building with our preference would not be replaced by other things.

　　However, the disadvantages in the society are looming. Nowadays, the city planners pursue a unified style in constructing an area, and the top concern for them is whether the new buildings could fit in the old ones, which might make the city look better in general, but contradicts the thoughts of former group mentioned. In addition, if a great number of styles were applied, it would have been harder and increased the cost for the later work of protection and maintenance.

　　In conclusion, what kind of styles people choose has both advantages and disadvantages, and the government should take different views into consideration, because to make our city better is the mutual purpose; to a certain extent, it can bring positive and unexpected results to give residents some freedom to meet their demands.