2018年1月20日雅思寫作范文

小作文

類型

線圖

題目

范文解析

本次小作文是一個動態(tài)的線圖。注意主要信息點總體趨勢，極值和數(shù)據(jù)的對比以及時態(tài)的表達方式。

高分表達（范文中已用紅色標注）

 how many visitors from North America and France travel to UK for doing business and for taking a holiday in one year

在一年中 有多少來自北美和法國的游客去英國做生意或度假。（用賓語從句改寫題目，注意下句型的轉(zhuǎn)換）

It is noticeable that

值得注意的是

in contrast to

相比于

with the peak at roughly 0.35 million and just 0.2 million separately in October or so.

兩者在十月份最高點分別是。。。 （獨立主格）

范文

The line graph illustrates how many visitors from North America and France travel to UK for doing business and for taking a holiday in one year.

It is noticeable that the number of visitors from North America and France who take a vacation in UK is equal at only approximately 1 million in January. Since then North America enjoys a jump until July while France increases slowly but in this month, as many as around 3 million travelers from North American come to UK, in contrast to only 1 million France visitors. By contrast, figures for both areas afterwards have dropped back to merely some 1 million again in December.

Similarly, both regions also follow a similar pattern in the number of annual visitors for business. From around 0.15 million and about 0.05 million respectively in January, figures for these two regions saw a slight fluctuation across the whole year, with the peak at roughly 0.35 million and just 0.2 million separately in October or so.

Overall, the number of visitors from North America is higher than that of France for business and holiday, although both share a similar trend during the one-year period.

范文來自邢睿贏老師~

字數(shù)

195words

大作文

類型

廣告類

題目

People are surrounded by advertising. This both affects what people think is important and has a negative impact on people’s lives.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

范文解析

本題討論廣告是否不僅影響人們認為重要的事情而且還對人們的生活產(chǎn)生負面影響。題目類型是議論文的一種觀點類是To what extant do you agree or disagree類型，可以采用雙邊討論，也就是5段式作文。

文章結(jié)構(gòu)

P1：引入話題+表明觀點（不同意）

P2：承認公益廣告的益處：更快更廣泛地傳遞一些公眾問題。

P3：指出廣告的弊端： 對人們的一些想法有負面影響。

P4：指出廣告的弊端：會浪費消費的金錢。

P5:總結(jié)：重申觀點

高分話題表達

 is bombarded with

注重個人形象的

non-commercial issues

非商業(yè)問題

more often than not

經(jīng)常

deforestation

森林砍伐

induce

引誘

top fashion model

時尚超模

are barraged with

連續(xù)炮擊

lure

引誘

excessively

過度地

impulsively

沖動地

Live up to

達到

高分結(jié)構(gòu)

though informing consumers of more useful information

 讓步狀語從句的省略

 take a heavy toll on

對...有負面影響

So powerful is this media that

 倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)

thus misleading them to expect an unrealistic , unattainable image.

非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)做結(jié)果狀語

not only Disney videos, products as well as clothing but other ideas,

Not only…but also 的平行

This is primarily because

這主要是因為

范文

Almost every single individual in today’s society is bombarded with different advertising from children’s programs on Saturday morning to talk shows and prime time TV and most of us has get used to it. However, though informing consumers of more useful information, advertising in most cases take a heavy toll on them.

Some public service advertising could motivate and educate the general public to pay attention to non-commercial issues such as AIDS, deforestation, family planning, etc. So powerful is this media that it is capable of reaching every corner of the world as fast as it can and of publicizing different significant ideas to all people. However, this is not that simple in reality as advertising more often than not mainly functions as a tool to advertise the availability of a product or service and to induce consumers to buy products and to increase sales.

Advertising delivers a false image and therefore influence how people think about themselves- often in a negative way. For adults, based on the images they see in advertisements, women may feel they should be thin and beautiful just as the top fashion model, thus misleading them to expect an unrealistic, unattainable image. Without it, they will become frustrated and less confident and this exert a detrimental effect on their health. For children, they are barraged with not only Disney videos, products as well as clothing but other ideas, like the notion that every little girl should be a “princess”, an impractical expectation that lures them to excessively emphasize appearance.

Direct-to-consumers advertising also results in wasting dollars. This is primarily because in order to tempt consumers to purchase, manufacturers often idealize their products, such as some beauty and health products but minimize their side effects. Most consumers may try and purchase them impulsively even by a higher price but this always ends with failure as these products hardly live up to their promises and finally are thrown away. 

In conclusion, informative as advertising proves to be, it does pose risks to people’s mind and finance. But it is still necessary in people’s lives and the key is how to use it critically.

字數(shù)

340 words