有人認(rèn)為，國(guó)際游的影響是有害的，他們?yōu)楹纬钟羞@種觀點(diǎn)，如何改變他們的的觀點(diǎn)?

　　點(diǎn)評(píng)：題目指令為分析原因和解決問(wèn)題。本文為舊題改寫(xiě)，需要完成的任務(wù)是分析國(guó)家發(fā)展旅游業(yè)帶來(lái)的弊端以及提出解決策略，幫助人們改變對(duì)于旅游業(yè)的消極態(tài)度。

　　全文布局圖：

　　首段：背景介紹 + 作家立場(chǎng)

　　二段：原因的展開(kāi)：談及為何一些人對(duì)于旅游業(yè)持有消極的的態(tài)度

　　三段：策略的展開(kāi)：談及國(guó)際旅游業(yè)的利好去說(shuō)服一些人對(duì)于旅游業(yè)的消極態(tài)度

　　尾段：作家立場(chǎng)：支持旅游業(yè)，總結(jié)旅游業(yè)對(duì)于游客和相關(guān)國(guó)家的利好。

　　首段：背景介紹 + 寫(xiě)作目的

　　International tourism has been encouraged in many nations around the globe because it produces positive effects on economic growth and local government. However，some problem inevitably ensue，which accounts for why some people hold negative attitudes toward international tourism. This essay aims to explore the reasons why some people are not supportive of tourism and then present some recommendations.

　　二段： 原因的展開(kāi)：(游客為何對(duì)于旅游業(yè)持有消極的態(tài)度)

　　The reasons why some people hold indifferent attitudes toward international tourism are manifold. Here, some of them will be explored. First, a large flowing population many cause serious destruction of the natural environment in those areas owing rich tourism resources. Further, some visitors unconscious behaviors might be considered as disrespectable and unfriendly due to the cultural differences. For instance，questions about religious beliefs， marriage，personal income are considered as taboo for some westerners. Eventually, even though sightseers might make the locals’ purse heavy, they, at the same time, interfere with the peaceful current life in some areas

　　1. It produces positive effects on economic growth and local government 國(guó)際旅游對(duì)經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展和地方政府有積極作用

　　2. However，some problem inevitably ensue，which accounts for why some people hold negative attitude towards international tourism.然而，一些問(wèn)題不可避免地隨著發(fā)生，這就解釋了為何一些人對(duì)于國(guó)際旅游業(yè)持有消極的態(tài)度。

　　3. This essay aims to explore the reasons why some people are not supportive of …… and then present some recommendations. 本文的寫(xiě)作目的是探究下為何一些人不支持……，再提出相關(guān)的建議。

　　4. A large flowing population many cause serious destruction of the natural environment in those areas owing rich tourism resources.大批游客的涌入會(huì)對(duì)那些擁有旅游資源地區(qū)的自然環(huán)境造成嚴(yán)重的破壞

　　5. Some visitors unconscious behaviors might be considered as disrespectable and unfriendly due to the cultural differences. 由于文化的差異，一些游客的行為也許會(huì)認(rèn)作是不值得尊敬的，不夠友善的。

　　6. For instance，questions about religious beliefs， marriage，personal income are considered as taboo for some westerners. 例如，有些西方人很忌諱別人打聽(tīng)他們的宗教信仰，婚姻狀況，個(gè)人收入。

　　7. Even though sightseers might make the locals’ purse heavy, they, at the same time, interfere with the peaceful current life in some areas. 盡管游客會(huì)增加地方人的收入，同時(shí)，他們也許會(huì)打擾一些地區(qū)一向平靜的生活。