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　　(2014·陜西)

　　My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.

　　One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky—they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.

　　That day I didn't learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!

　　答案：

　　My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all along with bows and arrows for hunting.

　　One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles jumped up and shot their arrows the bird. of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly the arrows flying down at us from the sky—they like rain! We ran to escape fortunately no one was injured.

　　That day I didn't learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt impressive lesson about gravity!