5.【江西省吉安市第一中學(xué)2015屆高三上學(xué)期第二次階段考】

　　高三學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)繁重。體育課已成為難得的放松時間, 可目前你們體育課內(nèi)容單一有時甚至被占用。請你用英語寫一篇短文給校報投稿, 詞數(shù)不少于80內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：

　　1. 目前體育課的現(xiàn)狀

　　2. 你對此現(xiàn)象的看法

　　3. 提出一些合理的建議

　　Dear editorAs the college entrance examination is drawing near,________________________________

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　　Yours Sincerely,

　　Li Hua

　　【答案】Dear editor,

　　As the college entrance examination is drawing near. We senior high school students are occupied with busy work. To a certain extent, PE class is our only chance to relax and enjoy ourselves at school. However, it is a pity that our present PE class is quite dull and sometimes even replaced by other subjects.

　　Not only can PE class build our body but also can shape our personality. It serves to develop our awareness of cooperation and spirit of competition. Therefore, personally I hold the view that it would be a great loss to us students if it were replaced by other lessons. Meanwhile, I think the teacher can design and organize some fun sports besides dull field and track practice or ball games, where everyone can be involved and have fun as well. After all, not everybody thinks running, jumping or ball games appealing.

　　I hope PE class can not only enrich our school life but also enable everyone to find his or her own pleasure in it.

　　應(yīng)該用現(xiàn)在時，第人稱。約個詞，不要太多或太少。盡量多使用較高級的詞匯和短語以及固定句式，注意句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。

　　【亮點說明】 文中用了一些高級的短語和句式。如：are occupied with To a certain extent 、Not only引導(dǎo)的倒裝句、which 和that引導(dǎo)的同位語從句、where引導(dǎo)的定語從句等都很不錯。

　　6.【山西省大同一中、同煤一中2015屆高三聯(lián)考】

　　假如你是星海中學(xué)的李華。你打算高三畢業(yè)后去美國留學(xué)，想咨詢你的美國筆友Mike，請你根據(jù)以下提示寫一封信。

　　1.目的：增長見識，體驗文化; 2.困惑：語言障礙，學(xué)業(yè)壓力; 3.征求建議。

　　注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于80 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 3.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總次數(shù)。

　　Dear Mike,

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　　yours,

　　Li Hua

　　Dear Mike,

　　I’ve finally made my decision to go to America for further study after high school.

　　I’ve been longing to go to America, mainly for two reasons. One is that I can experience American culture, and the other is that I can broaden my mind in this country. But I have some worries. My English is a bit poor, especially spoken English. I’m afraid I’ll have trouble communicating. Besides, I may suffer from heavy pressure from college courses.

　　I hope you can offer me some practical advice. Look forward to your reply.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　【解析】本題為書信寫作，主要就去美國留學(xué)的相關(guān)事宜咨詢筆友麥克。本題題目較為簡單，文章的大致內(nèi)容題目已經(jīng)給出，主要做適當(dāng)擴展即可。本文為經(jīng)典的三段論式寫作，第一段介紹背景，第二段介紹留學(xué)目的及困惑，第三段請求提出意見，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰明了。第二段第二句One is that I can experience American culture and the other is that I can broaden my mind in this country.使用了that領(lǐng)導(dǎo)的表語從句，且是兩個表語從句并列，同時還用了one…the other…句型表示一個…另一個….。本文短語使用很精彩，使用了be longing to渴望，have trouble doing…有困難…，suffer from忍受，皆是較好的短語。本文詞語使用的亮點在于副詞使用，如第一句I’ve finally made my decision，finally最終;第二段第一句mainly for two reasons. mainly主要是;第四句especially spoken English，especially特別是，這些副詞的使用使得文章詞匯特色頓時多樣了起來，為文章增加一大亮點�？偨Y(jié)：書信寫作時注意文章結(jié)構(gòu)，最好采用三段式，簡潔明了。

　　考點：考查書信寫作

　　7.【山東省實驗中學(xué)第三次診斷考試】

　　假如你是李華，從報紙上看到中老年英語培訓(xùn)機構(gòu)Mid.Senior ESCH面向高中畢業(yè)生招聘暑期兼職輔導(dǎo)員，負責(zé)學(xué)員課間服務(wù)事項。請根據(jù)下面的廣告內(nèi)容用英語寫一份求職信。

　　ASSISI ANTS WANTED

　　Valuable chances ale open for high school graduates who are good at English.Their work is to tend the senior students during the break.

　　Requirements attached：

　　1.Good at English.

　　2.Experienced priority.

　　Contact us by e-mail：midesch@163.com.

　　注意：

　　1.短文詞數(shù)100字左右;

　　2.不能使用真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱;

　　Dear Sir/Madam，

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　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Hua

　　【答案】

　　I’d like to apply for the post of assistant which was advertised in the newspaper. I found this position quite appealing to me.

　　I’ve just graduated from high school. Luckily I am good at English and I can speak English fluently. In addition, I have previous experience. During my stay in middle school, I used to be a volunteer and looked after the old people in a nursing home on weekends.

　　In short, I believe my experience and fluent oral English will be a great help for me in doing the work. I’m available for interview at any time. It would be appreciated if I can get your offer.

　　【解析】

　　考點：考查應(yīng)用文寫作。

　　8.【遼寧省丹東五校協(xié)作體2015屆高三期末考試】

　　假如你是李華，你向美國筆友Jack介紹你校開設(shè)的學(xué)生社團活動的情況，大致內(nèi)容介紹：

　　1、活動對象：高一和高二學(xué)生;活動時間：每周二的三點鐘以后。

　　2、 通過參加活動，你們的收獲。

　　3、 你的感受。

　　注意：1、詞數(shù)不少于100;

　　2、開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù);

　　3、 可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫;

　　Dear Mike,

　　Thank you for your letter asking about the club activities in our school.

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　　Li hua

　　【答案】Dear Jack,

　　Thank you for your letter asking about the club activities in our school .These clubs are set up by the Students’ Union and they are intended for students from Grade Two and Grade Three, open after 3 o’clock on Tuesday afternoon.

　　The club activities, aiming to offer students more opportunities to show their different talents, benefit us a lot. Taking part in club activities can help us to make new friends, expand our circle, and develop interpersonal skills. At the same time, these activities can help us to develop self-confidence, communicating with each other more easily. Besides, we have developed different skills and many interests, which enrich our lives.

　　In my opinion, I acquire more knowledge in an interesting way. Meanwhile, I bring myself more relaxation after hard study, which reduces my tiredness.

　　【解析】