【母題】18 短文改錯(cuò)

【母題來源】【2015·陜西卷高考短文改錯(cuò)】

【母題原題】

【2015·陜西】短文改錯(cuò)(共10小題;每小題1.5分，滿分15分)

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌系的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處 。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪 除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線( )劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線( )，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞

2.只允許修改10處，多者 (從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing mo st of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.

At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire ag ain next year just get some more of these biscuits.”

My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!