How to Prevent Drink Driving From Happening?

　　(1) 酒后駕駛已經(jīng)成為危害公共安全的重要因素

　　(2) 如何最大限度地防止此類問題的發(fā)生

　　(3) 我的觀點(diǎn)

　　專家支招

　　本文對于酒后駕駛這一社會熱點(diǎn)問題進(jìn)行了探討，主要討論如何防止此類問題的發(fā)生，是一篇需要提出解決方案的論說文，寫作時應(yīng)圍繞提綱進(jìn)行構(gòu)思：① 第一段提出酒后駕駛現(xiàn)象及其危害，第二段提出自己的解決方案，第三段總結(jié)自己的想法。② 寫作時應(yīng)當(dāng)注意措辭準(zhǔn)確、結(jié)構(gòu)條理、正確使用銜接句。

　　How to Prevent Drink Driving From Happening?

　　Recently, there have been tremendous reports on accidents caused by drink driving and controversial sentences of criminals. ①The miserable tragedies have demonstrated that drink driving has become a serious problem harmful to the public security. ②Therefore, something must be done to prevent such things from happening.

　�、� First of all, corresponding laws and regulations should be made to clarify the definition and penalties of drink driving, so that the fear of punishment may pull drivers away from alcohol. Secondly, the administrations and media should actively promote the modification of so-called ④ “wine culture” to avoid compelled drinking, in order that the drivers may say “no” to the toast proposals. Last but not least, the inspections and monitors of the government and the society should be reinforced to immediately identify drunk drivers and prevent drivers from drinking.

　　In conclusion, it is the responsibility of everybody to reduce drink driving to the minimum. ⑤ Only when the problem is efficiently controlled can we live more safely and comfortably.

　　Analysis

　　① demonstrate常用于闡明現(xiàn)象，引出主旨。

　　② 提出觀點(diǎn)，something must be done也可以用we should take measures代替。

　�、� 提出建議。corresponding laws and regulations, pull...away from均適用于解決問題類作文。用alcohol指代飲酒以避免重復(fù)。

　�、� wine culture“酒文化”，有中國特色的固定表達(dá)。

　�、� Only位于句首時主句采用部分倒裝語序，注意從句采用正常語序。

　　舉一反三

　　Recently, there have been tremendous reports on accidents caused by drink driving and controversial sentences of criminals.

　　a. Recently, it has been tremendously reported that there are lots of accidents caused by drink driving and controversial sentences of criminals.

　　b. Recently, many reports are released on accidents caused by drink driving and controversial sentences of criminals.