Tradition and Modernization

　　(1) 有人認(rèn)為傳統(tǒng)文化應(yīng)當(dāng)盡可能保留

　　(2) 有人認(rèn)為犧牲傳統(tǒng)文化來(lái)發(fā)展現(xiàn)代文化是值得的

　　(3) 我認(rèn)為

　　專(zhuān)家支招

　　這是一個(gè)闡釋對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)型的題目，文章討論了是否應(yīng)當(dāng)犧牲傳統(tǒng)文化來(lái)發(fā)展現(xiàn)代化的問(wèn)題，寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)當(dāng)圍繞提綱進(jìn)行構(gòu)思：①第一段闡明保留傳統(tǒng)文化的作用和觀點(diǎn)，第二段說(shuō)明傳統(tǒng)與現(xiàn)代化的沖突并權(quán)衡利弊，第三段提出自己的觀點(diǎn)。② 寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意語(yǔ)言做到準(zhǔn)確流暢，可以適當(dāng)應(yīng)用復(fù)合句，使文章銜接自然。

　　導(dǎo)師點(diǎn)評(píng)

　　Tradition and Modernization

　　The process of modernization today is even greater than before. It is unavoidable that some achievements are made ① at the cost of tradition. Many people believe that tradition should be reserved to the largest extent. On the one hand, they think that the tradition is the ②cream of history with perfect conclusion and abstraction, and thus it should be followed. On the other hand, we should keep our own traditional characteristics as a culture, so that we can find our own position in a world of ③ diversity.

　　However, some people believe that it is worthwhile to abandon tradition for modernization. In the first place, they view the history as a④ linear course moving forward, and outdated concepts must be timely eliminated. In the second place, they believe that civilization is more important, and should be realized ⑤ at all costs.

　　As far as I am concerned, we should sort out the universal truth in our tradition and stick to them. But we should also selectively put down some traditions for a better life.

　　Analysis

　�、� at the cost of表示“以……為代價(jià)”，可以用于表示犧牲某些東西來(lái)實(shí)現(xiàn)目的。

　�、� 可以用cream來(lái)表示“精華”，可以指人或物，表達(dá)簡(jiǎn)潔準(zhǔn)確。③ 表示多樣性的時(shí)候可以用diversity或者variety。

　�、� linear一詞可以用于描述一切線性或單向發(fā)展的過(guò)程，在描述與時(shí)空相關(guān)的內(nèi)容時(shí)也可以使用。

　�、� at all costs表示“不惜一切代價(jià)”，可用于強(qiáng)調(diào)話題的重要性。

　　舉一反三

　　1. It is unavoidable that some achievements are made at the cost of tradition.

　　a. It is inevitable that some achievements are made at the cost of tradition.

　　b. It cannot be avoided that some achievements are made at the cost of tradition.

　　2. However, some people believe that it is worthwhile to abandon tradition for modernization.

　　a. However, some people believe that it is worthy to abandon tradition for modernization.

　　b. However, some people believe that it is rewarding to abandon tradition for modernization.