2018年6月英語六級寫作模擬題：人與電腦

　　【英語六級寫作模擬題】

　　write an essay entitled Man and Computer by commenting on the saying, “The real danger is not that the computer will begin to think like man, but that man will begin to think like the computer.”

　　【英語六級寫作模擬題答案】

　　Man and Computer

　　It is believed that the computer is bringing the world into a brand new era. At the time the computer was invented, scientists, marveling at its calculating speed, felt that they had created a miracle. Nowadays, the function of the computer is no longer confined to calculation; it permeates people’s daily lives and has become an inseparable part of human society.

　　People become so heavily dependent on computers that it is hard to imagine the life without computers. Therefore, some people are worried that “The real danger is not that the computer will think like man, but man will think like the computer.” Their concern does make sense. Indeed, some people spend such a long time working on computers that they have few interactions with people in real life. According to a research, too many hours in front of a computer may lead to a poker face and interpersonal isolation. This fact should arouse our attention, because unlike computers, human beings are social creatures that need emotional connections with others. Yet, it is also unnecessary for us to be overwhelmed by the negative impacts of computers. After all, we humans are intelligent and will be able to figure out better ways to make improvements.

　　點評：本次六級作文的題目是人與電腦，對“真正的危險不是電腦開始像人一樣思考，而是人開始像電腦一樣思考�！边@句話發(fā)表自己的觀點。題目不算新，一般考生對此都比較熟悉，所以對考生來說難度不大。寫好這篇作文，需要抓住兩點，一是緊跟題目要求，即對這句引言做出評論，二是在評論的基礎(chǔ)上要亮出自己的觀點。 范文第一段首先 陳述電腦自發(fā)明以來對人們生活的深刻的影響， 從而為第二段內(nèi)容的陳述奠定基礎(chǔ)。 第二段第一句話先自然地過渡，引出題干中的引言。對引言作出評價：這樣的擔(dān)憂確實不是空穴來風(fēng)。然后用例子證明現(xiàn)代生活中電腦已經(jīng)對人們的思維和習(xí)慣帶來的負(fù)面影響。呼吁大家引起重視，因為人畢竟不同于電腦，是有情感需求的。 最后一段是一個轉(zhuǎn)折， 提出對于電腦對人的影響也不用太悲觀，因為人畢竟是有智慧、有主觀能動性的，一定會想出改善不足的方法。這樣的轉(zhuǎn)折使作者的觀點更全面、有說服力。

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