【英語六級寫作試題】

　　directions：for this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic a letter to the university president about the canteen service campus. you should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline below:

　　假如你是李明，請你就本學(xué)校食堂的狀況給校長寫一封信，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：食堂的飯菜質(zhì)量、價格、環(huán)境、服務(wù)等，可以是表揚，也可以是批評建議，也可以都有。

　　[寫作模板：架構(gòu)階段]

　　第一段：稱呼

　　dear mr. president,

　　第二段：引出寫信的目的

　　主題句： this letter comes to you from ____.

　　擴(kuò)展句： in it, some opinions are put forward for you to reflect upon

　　第三段：對學(xué)校食堂正面的看法

　　主題句：as you know, _____ . but unfortunately, ______.

　　擴(kuò)展句：1、___. (舉例) as a result, _____.

　　2、besides, ______.

　　3、and what's more, _____.

　　第四段：對學(xué)校食堂負(fù)面的看法

　　主題句：some people may argue that ____.

　　擴(kuò)展句：1、for instance, ____ and ____.

　　2、but in my opinon, ______.

　　第五段：結(jié)尾，表明自己看法

　　結(jié)尾句：to be belief, though a bit dissatisfied with _____.

　　擴(kuò)展句：i do believe that, with the efforts of all people concerned, we can solved the problems there. thanks.　li ming

　　[寫作模板：填充階段]

　　第一段：稱呼

　　dear mr. president,

　　第二段：引出寫信的目的

　　主題句： this letter comes to you from one of your students.

　　擴(kuò)展句： in it, some opinions are put forward for you to reflect upon

　　第三段：對學(xué)校食堂的看法

　　主題句：as you know, our students are the main customers of the university canteen. but unfortunately, we don't find the service there satisfying sometimes.

　　擴(kuò)展句：

　　1、the food is not as nutritious as it should be. (舉例) as a result, some of us become thinner and weaker at university.

　　2、besides, sometimes the canteen people just bring us steamed bread with their dirty bare hands.

　　3、and what's more, the fare is also a little higher at university.

　　第四段：別人對食堂看法

　　主題句：some people may argue that measures have been taken and things are improving there.

　　擴(kuò)展句：

　　1、for instance, ic cards have taken the place of money in the canteed, and the attitude of the service people is also changing.

　　2、but in my opinon, progress is not so quick and thorough.

　　第五段：結(jié)尾，表明自己看法

　　結(jié)尾句：to be belief, though a bit dissatisfied with the present canteen conditions,

　　擴(kuò)展句：i do believe that, with the efforts of all people concerned, we can solved the problems there. thanks.

　　【范文】

　　dear mr. president,

　　this letter comes to you from one of your students.in it, some opinions are put forward for you to reflect upon.

　　as you know, our students are the main customers of the university canteen. but unfortunately, we don't find the service there satisfying sometimes.the food is not as nutritious as it should be. as a result, some of us become thinner and weaker at university.besides, sometimes the canteen people just bring us steamed bread with their dirty bare hands.and what's more, the fare is also a little higher at university.

　　some people may argue that measures have been taken and things are improving there.for instance, ic cards have taken the place of money in the canteed, and the attitude of the service people is also changing.but in my opinon, progress is not so quick and thorough.

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