2017下半年大學(xué)英語六級(jí)作文范文：助學(xué)貸款

　　advantages of getting a loan from the bank for my studies 助學(xué)貸款的優(yōu)勢(shì)

　　i am a college student f rom a farme r’s family in a mountaineous area . a year ago , i was admitted to a famous univer - sity . befor e ente ring the unive rsity , i was told tha t the necessary expenses during my four year s’study would cost nearly fifty thousand yuan . my parents had collected all the money ther e was to collect , including the money bor rowed f rom their relatives , but it was hardly enough to meet the needs . t hen , good news came that i could resor t to the bank for a loan . i thought it was a good idea and so i did it .

　　my decision was based on the following con sider ations : first , with the loan i can pay the tuition and support my life on the campus .

　　secondly , i don’t have to depend on my par ents who are always wor rying about the enormou s family expenditur e .thirdly , i will always have the pr ess ure upon me which forces me to study the hard way .

　　four thly , i have to live a very simple life and save every coin possible . t o sooner liquidat e the debt , i sometimes work as a home tutor , sometimes a door-to-door salesman , sometimes a restaur ant waiter .

　　fifthly , while doing par t-time jobs , i have accumulated a lot of social experience , bitt er sometimes , sweet occasionally , but happy all the time .

　　i think the above ar e the advantages the loan f rom the bank has brought to me . t hey are beneficial not only to my studies at the unive rsity but also to my future career , because i firmly believe in the saying“ har sh life produces a diligent and intelligent man .”

　　cet6六級(jí)作文結(jié)構(gòu)分析：

　　· 上大學(xué)需要費(fèi)用

　　* 家庭困難

　　* 助學(xué)貸款好消息

　　·優(yōu)點(diǎn)

　　* 付學(xué)費(fèi)和生活費(fèi)

　　* 不依賴父母

　　* 有壓力感

　　* 生活儉樸, 勤工儉學(xué)

　　* 品嘗社會(huì)百味

　　· 結(jié)論

　　* 艱苦的生活能培養(yǎng)出勤奮而有智慧的人

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　　cet6六級(jí)作文內(nèi)容分析：

　　本文是一篇記敘文。作者以第一人稱來寫, 首先記敘希望助學(xué)貸款之由來, 主體部分列出了助學(xué)貸款之五大優(yōu)點(diǎn)。最后一句引言“ 艱苦的生活能培養(yǎng)出勤奮而有智慧的人”結(jié)束全文。這類題目的寫作必須整理出幾條輕重相當(dāng)?shù)膬?yōu)點(diǎn), 每條優(yōu)點(diǎn)的表達(dá)意義要完整, 可用一句、兩句或多句來寫。本文較適合六級(jí)水平。

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　　cet6六級(jí)作文萬能句型：

　　loan n . 貸款

　　mountaineous ar ea 山區(qū)

　　be admitt ed to 被錄取入

　　expen se n . 費(fèi)用

　　collect all the money there was to collect 收 集所有能收集到的錢

　　resort to 求助于

　　tuition n . 學(xué)費(fèi)

　　family expenditure 家庭開支

　　study the ha rd way 努力學(xué)習(xí)

　　liquidat e the debt 償清欠債

　　home tutor 家教

　　door- to-door salesman 上門推銷員

　　accumulate v . 積累

　　social experience 社會(huì)經(jīng)驗(yàn)

　　bitte r sometimes , sweet occasionally , but happy all the

　　time 時(shí)苦時(shí)甜, 但總是很快樂

　　beneficial a . 有利的

　　ha rsh life produces a diligent and intelligent man . 艱苦的生活能培養(yǎng)出勤奮而有智慧的人