2017下半年大學(xué)英語六級作文范文：種種承諾

　　such a promise種種承諾

　　when i first look at the car toon , i can’t help laughing at the hen who seems to be seriously making a foolis h announcement to the public that she always lays eggs , smooth and round and never without eggwhite and yolk in side the shell . howeve r , when i star t to study the car toon mor e ca refully , i find something significant in it and gradually i come to unde rstand the author’s intention .

　　nowadays , almost all tr ades and professions ar e r epeatedly making sincer e promises to people: government people assure that they a re noble and clean and will serve people hea rt and soulmer chants smilingly swear tha t the products they sell are of s uperior quality , genuine instead of false, life- time maintenance gua ranteed and the cheapest ma rket price; adver tisers take pains to r ecommend mir acle drugs and make-youbeautiful cosmetics , etc . year af ter year , s uch promises are repeated . i wonder why they t ake so much trouble to boast oudly about their obligations and duties . people believed them at first , but gradually became awakened becau se they have found some dishonesty in such bombing promises .

　　“actions speak louder than words .” the hen is foolish enough to make he r egg-promise, why shouldn’t those nonsense- maker s become cleve rer ?

　　cet6六級作文結(jié)構(gòu)分析：

　　· paragraph 1 —

　　* inte rpretation of the car toon

　　* my understanding

　　· paragraph 2 —

　　* promises made by all t r ades and professions

　　* awakening of the people

　　· paragraph 3 —

　　*“actions speak louder than word s .”

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　　cet6六級作文內(nèi)容分析：

　　本文是一篇漫畫作文, 畫的寓意是“各行各業(yè)的種種承諾本應(yīng)是自身的職責(zé), 卻要大肆渲染, 無疑是多此一舉”, 其愚蠢程度不亞于圖中“ 母雞下蛋的承諾”。這類題型必須把握其寓意( hidden meaning) , 方能切中主題。本文第一段用兩句解釋了 漫畫, 其開頭不落俗套, 文筆幽默。第二段切入主題, 例舉各種“ 多此一舉”的承諾, 筆調(diào)生動, 最后一句是有力的揭露。結(jié)尾段 中引用了一句成語并奉勸承諾者不要像母雞那樣愚蠢本題曾是一次考研寫作題, 漫畫取自于21 世紀(jì)報(bào), 作者借題自行撰文。

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　　cet6六級作文萬能句型：

　　car toon n . 漫畫

　　can’t help + -ing 禁不住⋯⋯

　　lay eggs 下蛋

　　eggwhit e n . 蛋白

　　yolk n . 蛋黃

　　all t r ades and professions 各行各業(yè)

　　serve people hear t and soul 全心全意為人民服務(wù)

　　swear v . 發(fā)誓

　　superior quality 優(yōu)質(zhì)

　　genuine instead of false 真貨而不是假貨

　　life-time maintenance guarant eed 保證終身維修

　　take pains to + v . 費(fèi)盡心思去⋯⋯

　　miracle drugs 神藥

　　make-you-beautiful cosmetics “使你美”化妝品

　　year after year 年復(fù)一年

　　boast about 吹噓

　　obligation n . 責(zé)職, 義務(wù)

　　dishonesty in such bombing promises 轟炸性的承諾中的欺騙

　　actions speak louder than words . 聽其言更要觀其行

　　nonsense-maker s 說廢話者