Advantages of Getting a Loan from the Bank forMy Studies

　　助學(xué)貸款的優(yōu)勢

　　I am a college student from a farmer's family in amountaineous area. A year ago, I was admitted to afamous university. Before entering the university, Iwas told that the necessary expenses during my fouryears'study would cost nearly fifty thousand yuan.My parents had collected all the money there was tocollect, including the money bor rowed from theirrelatives, but it was hardly enough to meet the needs. Then, good news came that I couldresort to the bank for a loan. I thought it was a good idea and so I did it.

　　My decision was based on the following con sider ations: First, with the loan I can pay thetuition and support my life on the campus.

　　Secondly, I don't have to depend on my parents who are always worrying about the enormousfamily expenditure.

　　Thirdly, I will always have the pressure upon me which forces me to study the hard way.

　　Fourthly, I have to live a very simple life and save every coin possible. To sooner liquidate thedebt, I sometimes work as a home tutor, sometimes a door-to-door salesman, sometimes arestaur ant waiter.

　　Fifthly, while doing part-time jobs, I have accumulated a lot of social experience, bittersometimes, sweet occasionally, but happy all the time.

　　I think the above are the advantages the loan from the bank has brought to me. They arebeneficial not only to my studies at the university but also to my future career, because Ifirmly believe in the saying "Harsh life produces a diligent and intelligent man."

　　CET6六級作文結(jié)構(gòu)分析：

　　·上大學(xué)需要費(fèi)用

　　* 家庭困難

　　* 助學(xué)貸款好消息

　　·優(yōu)點(diǎn)

　　* 付學(xué)費(fèi)和生活費(fèi)

　　* 不依賴父母

　　* 有壓力感

　　* 生活儉樸, 勤工儉學(xué)

　　* 品嘗社會百味

　　· 結(jié)論

　　* 艱苦的生活能培養(yǎng)出勤奮而有智慧的人

　　CET6六級作文內(nèi)容分析：

　　本文是一篇記敘文。作者以第一人稱來寫, 首先記敘希望助學(xué)貸款之由來, 主體部分列出了助學(xué)貸款之五大優(yōu)點(diǎn)。最后一句引言“ 艱苦的生活能培養(yǎng)出勤奮而有智慧的人”結(jié)束全文。這類題目的寫作必須整理出幾條輕重相當(dāng)?shù)膬?yōu)點(diǎn), 每條優(yōu)點(diǎn)的表達(dá)意義要完整, 可用一句、兩句或多句來寫。本文較適合六級水平。

　　CET6六級作文萬能句型：

　　loan n. 貸款

　　mountaineous area 山區(qū)

　　be admitted to 被錄取入

　　expense n. 費(fèi)用

　　collect all the money there was to collect 收集所有能收集到的錢

　　resort to 求助于

　　tuition n. 學(xué)費(fèi)

　　family expenditure 家庭開支

　　study the hard way 努力學(xué)習(xí)

　　liquidate the debt 償清欠債

　　home tutor 家教

　　door- to-door salesman 上門推銷員

　　accumulate v. 積累

　　social experience 社會經(jīng)驗(yàn)

　　bitter sometimes, sweet occasionally, but happy all the

　　time 時(shí)苦時(shí)甜, 但總是很快樂

　　beneficial a. 有利的

　　Harsh life produces a diligent and intelligent man. 艱苦的生活能培養(yǎng)出勤奮而有智慧的人