Campus Open Day on Internet

　　1. 目前有部分高校打造網(wǎng)上校園開放日，各院系入駐微博，為全國(guó)高考(微博)學(xué)生、家長(zhǎng)和社會(huì)各界朋友提供全方位、立體化、跨時(shí)空的在線咨詢服務(wù);

　　2. 針對(duì)這一現(xiàn)象，有人認(rèn)為此舉甚好，節(jié)省資源;但有人認(rèn)為網(wǎng)絡(luò)交流效果會(huì)不盡如人意;

　　3. 談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/P>

　　Campus Open Day on Internet

　　【范文】

　　With the development of computers, some universities hold Campus Open Day on Internet. All faculties of these universities have microblog accounts which aim for offering comprehensive online consulting service for students and parents.

　　People hold different opinions to this phenomenon. Those who in favor of it think it can save both human resources and material resources. On the contrary, others dissatisfy with the results of online communication.

　　As to me, I think it is a convenient way for students to get useful and updated infomation about their interested universities. Students can obtain information more quickly and correctly, raise any questions they have casually and get answers more timely. But every coin has two sides. Meanwhile, related colleges and departments are called upon to actively involve themselves in strengthening the supervision regarding the authenticity of information shared and released.

　　【點(diǎn)評(píng)】

　　文章第一段介紹了部分高校提供網(wǎng)上校園開放日這一情況，然后在第二段分別敘述了人們對(duì)待此事的不同觀點(diǎn)，第三段結(jié)合自己的觀點(diǎn)對(duì)該現(xiàn)象發(fā)表意見并提出建議。

　　第一段中microblog accounts意為“微博賬號(hào)”，后面涉及which引導(dǎo)的定語從句，其中comprehensive意為“全面的”，online consulting service意為“在線咨詢服務(wù)”;第二段中in favor of意為“贊成”，dissatisfy with意為“對(duì)……不滿意”;第三段中用了幾個(gè)副詞修飾，more quickly and correctly意為“更加迅速準(zhǔn)確地”，casually意為“隨意地”， timely意為“及時(shí)地”， strengthening the supervision意為“加強(qiáng)監(jiān)督”。