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　　Part IWriting

　　【范文】

　　Internet and the Distance among People

　　As we can see from the picture, Internet connects the human society together, but sadly, walls of barrier are estricting people in their own space.

　　It is undeniable that Internet has changed the way people live. With many programs such as instant messaging, online communities, micro.blogs and so forth, communication can nearly be carried out everywhere at any time. But despite the great convenience, we find the distance among people becomes farther, instead of nearer. We play online games and forget to call the family; we sit alone surfing the net with mobile phones when classmates are gathering together; children today often play with the tablet computers, rather than with other kids from the neighborhood.

　　In my view, we should use the Internet reasonably, and keep in mind that the real life is much more meaningful than the virtual one. To be closer to other people, we should talk with them, using our voice, instead offinger tips. And we should pass this idea on to the younger generation.

　　【譯文】

　　互聯(lián)網(wǎng)與人們之間的距離

　　正如我們從圖片中所看到的，互聯(lián)網(wǎng)將人類社會聯(lián)系在一起，但悲哀的是，重重阻隔將人們只限制在自己的空間。

　　無可否認，互聯(lián)網(wǎng)改變了人們的生活方式，有了即時通訊軟件、網(wǎng)絡社區(qū)、微博等等，交流可以隨時隨地實現(xiàn)。但盡管互聯(lián)網(wǎng)帶來了如此大的便利，我們卻發(fā)現(xiàn)人與人之間的距離變得越來越疏遠，而不是越來越親近。我們可能只顧著玩網(wǎng)絡游戲而忘了給家人打電話，也可能在同學聚會的時候獨自坐在角落里用手機上網(wǎng);如今的小孩經(jīng)常是在玩平板電腦，而不是和鄰居家的小孩一起玩。

　　在我看來，我們應該合理使用互聯(lián)網(wǎng)，并且記住：真實世界要比虛擬世界更有意義。為了拉近與他人的距離，我們應該多用聲音而不是用指尖與他們交流。而且我們應該將這一理念傳遞給年輕的一代。

　　【要點用法】

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　　undeniable無可否認的surf瀏覽;網(wǎng)上沖浪

　　instant messaging即時通訊軟件tablet computer平板電腦

　　online community網(wǎng)絡社區(qū)virtual虛擬的

　　micro-blog微博finger tip指尖

　　【句法點評】

　　1.As we can see from the picture，Internet connects the human society together，but sadly…

　　首段描述圖畫的內容，用connect…together表示“聯(lián)系在一起”，用but sadly轉入相反方面的事實。

　　2.It is undeniable that Internet has changed the way people live.

　　本句為it引導的主語從句，真正的主語是that后面的內容。Itisundeniable意為“無可否認的是……”，也可以替換為undoubtedly。

　　3.But despite the great convenience，we fmd the distance among people becomes farther，instead of nearer.despite意為“盡管”，表示讓步，其后面可以直接接名詞或名詞短語。farther與nearer相對。instead of意為“而不是”。有強調的作用。

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